User blog comment:The Puppeteer King/Why Do People Ship?/@comment-26072045-20150716002644/@comment-27159736-20150716072444

good point but in the end I thought it was marketing of cynicalism  not part of naivety. This was my first time doing a full blog not like my previous ones which were practically nothing so naturally I would make mistakes or  make it go off the rails a bit. Next time I am gonna try to work on my phrasing or look at it in a simplier way rather than that big mess up there.

My other blog on Pacifica's fans did show hints of being slightly more organised than this one but ultimately it just needs to be less cynical than this one or proper phrasing.