Thread:MinecraftPercabeth/@comment-26230503-20150325142507/@comment-25094659-20150325154504

I've bounced around from ciriculum to ciriculum, so I may have missed it :P Thanks for the lesson. However, since I didn't know, I was certain. Maybe some ciriculums each cumulative adjectives sooner than others, so to you it's common knowledge, but to others it's not.

The Sentence is Contrary to this incriminating article, it is discovered that Stan Pines is at least the direct brother of, if not, the one mentioned in the article who is actually alive.

The wonky part is "Stan Pines is at least the direct brother of, if not, the one mentioned in the article." It's trying to say that the Stan we know is either the one mentioned in the article, or the brother of the one mentioned in the article. The way it's phrased is a little messed up though, plus we don't know that the author is named Stan as well. We also aren't supposed to understand the article just yet, so it'd make sense for us not to.

All-in-all, even if we do keep it, it should at least be re-phrased. It shouldn't stand the way it does.