User blog comment:Totally me245/The Secrets to the Paranormal ~Chapter 1: The Weirdness~/@comment-24515411-20140217164204

when mavis first showed up and before he was described or named my thoughts were "BILL CIPHER. it's totally bill guys, no need to worry."

though all in all, great story. just needs some dusting over  when it comes to typos. interesting plot though. *thumbs up*