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OnlyOnTuesdays88 wrote: Ok. The easiest way to rephrase a sentence as confusing as this is to first break it up into parts so that we can better understand it:

''The article is not true. Stan is the brother of the man mentioned in the article. Stan might even be the man mentioned in the article but alive.''

We can just remove the brother part since there was nothing suggesting that. MAYBE something like this:

Despite this, the man they know as Stan Pines is very much alive, unlike what the article suggests.

Oh geez I feel like I'm back in my high school expository writing course. That sounds a lot better, especially since it doesn't suggest the name of the author, which is technically unknown.