User blog comment:Ralphini/A Gravity Falls fanfiction I've been working on/@comment-26035847-20160922183244

I like it! The idea of writing about the Henchmaniacs and kinda creating unique personalities for them is actually pretty great, since they barely talked at all in the series lol.

Only criticism I can think of is that some of them in your one-shots have a bit different speech patterns than in the show, like 8-Ball. For the very short time that he talked, he didn't have a very large vocabulary and wasn't that great at forming sentences XD. For the rest of them though it's great to see their personalities and read more about them.

Keep it up! I like what you have so far