Board Thread:Site Problems and Appearance/@comment-25094659-20150325160337

Another editer and I have found a certain sentence on the Author's page confusing, and would like help in rephrasing it. It goes as such:

Contrary to this incriminating article, it is discovered that Stan Pines is at least the direct brother of, if not, the one mentioned in the article who is actually alive.

There are three problems with the sentence. For one, it's hard to understand: I had to read it about ten times to finally understand what it was saying.

Secondly, the actually meaning is a little assumative. It's basically stating that they later learn the article aformentioned refers either to Stan Pines or his brother. The problem is that, they never actually learn anything more about the paper, and it's still supposed to be a mystery until later

Thirdly, it assumes that the Author's name is Stan, which hasn't technically been confirmed yet. As far as we know (theories don't count), the article states that Stan Pines is dead, but he isn't, so it's confusing, nothing more.

So we need to either re-phrase the statement so it makes more sense and no longer assumes anything, or we need to remove it. However, the other editer I mentioned doesn't feel removing would be ideal, so we've decided to re-phrase it instead. 