User blog comment:Mango Dolphin/Mango Tells All/@comment-71.172.3.81-20130305233154

I have a question for you. Should I put this scene in a book I'm writing which is a fan idea for a Gravity Falls episode. The characters in this scene are McKenna (I made), Drake (I made), Tyler (I made), Dipper,Mabel,Gideon,Alexia (I made),and Dustfoot(I made).

Gideon had trapped McKenna at the edge and said"Ha! I trapped you now! Give me your necklace or die!" McKenna tried to get help from her friends and called

Tyler! Drake! Dipper! Mabel! One of you, help me!

Tyler,Drake,Dipper,and Mabel froze. Not helping a bit. So McKenna fell off the cliff, losing her first life. She had one more life because she could talk to Star Clan. Tyler caught up to her, but she refuesd to talk to any of them. She thought they were tratiors. She went to the forest in her cat morph which was her real body to see her sister Nightail (Alexia). Her sister was in shock that her best friends would do that to her. When she went back to Thunder Clan camp Dustfoot padded up to her and gave her a quick lick and asks her "What's wrong Autumnclaw?" "My friends. They're tratiors." Autumnclaw (McKenna) replied faintly. Then Dustfoot and Autumnclaw start dating,then Grayheart (Tyler) finds out that Dustfoot wants to kill Autumnclaw.If you read the warriors books you might see a refrence to Tigerclaw,Bluestar, and Fireheart in the first seires where Fireheart finds out that Tigerclaw wants to kill Bluestar and Fireheart tells Bluestar  but Bluestar dosen't belive him. Okay back to the scene in my story! Then Dustfoot tries to kill Autumnclaw but luckily Grayheart saves her. What do you think of this? Should I put it in or not?