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Clarasuger wrote: wow.

Like so far?

That wasn't even 10% of what I wrote. I sat down for a few minutes to write a little thing insprired by the opening of the show, hours later I came up for air with something I wouldn't be ashamed to show Alex Hirsh. It's full of science and history and humor and references to the show.

It very much reads like it was started by Ford, picked up by Dipper, and has teasing additions by Soos and Mabel making fun of how serious Dipper is about writing in his journal. He then uses stuff he learned during the series to get a little piece and quiet to write.

It need a second draft and some polish, but I'm pretty proud of it. Crtiques and suggestions for improvements are eagerly welcomed.

I'll post another section tomorrow. But I really need to finish work on a code I'm designing. I'm just afraid that it's too difficult to be fun to try to crack.