User blog comment:Bongo9911/Mystery Shack Mystery Walkthrough/@comment-3411077-20120708220933

Just some friendly advice (please don't take this as an insult):

Whenever you make a walkthrough, try talking and explaining more about what you have to do in the game because your audience not only wants to visually see what you're doing, they also want to know what you're doing audibly. Throughout the video, I could hardly understand a word you said and most of your talking was whispering or either blocked out by the game music and white noise in the background. Other than that, not bad.